Friday, June 4, 2010

Blog # 2: Ray Atkins and His Writing Habits

My first important writing habit is to quit while I’m ahead. This is also not a bad tip for you gamblers out there. In the context of writing, however, what I mean is that I try to stop my day’s work at a good place in the story, a spot where the writing is coming easy and the prose is not strained. This tactic is actually mentioned by Hemingway in A Moveable Feast, and for me the habit has been a life-saver. When I first began to write long fiction, I would write each day as if it were my last. The problem with that was that I often had difficulty getting started the following day, because I had used up all of my material. I found that it was much easier to pick up the thread if I had stopped while there was still something to say.


My second important writing habit is to let the work mature once it has been completed. By this I mean that I resist the almost-overwhelming urge to send out my work to publishers, editors, and the like immediately after completion. The reason I do this is simply because I have found out the hard way over the years that the longer I let a “completed” piece age before one final proofread, the more I find wrong with the story. When I first finish a piece, I am still too close to the material to see the flaws, be they simple typos or more serious issues. But if I put the story away for a while, the issues literally leap from the page during the proofread. Incidentally, there is no clear endpoint to this phenomenon. I have two books in print, and I would change parts of each right now if I had the chance.



My final important writing habit is to show the work. I can’t overstate the importance of letting other people read and comment upon the work-in-progress. I’m going to get personal here for a moment and admit that I am afflicted by a serious condition which causes me to believe that every single word I write is a pearl. I am absolutely certain that each and every phrase is a life-changer for some deserving reader. My only defense against this malady is to get input from people I trust. I have a small cadre of readers who will tell me what I need to hear, even if it isn’t always what I want to hear.

If I had to pick which of these habits is the most important and perhaps the most universal, I think it would be number two. Writing is hard work, and once a piece is completed, my tendency is to want someone else to tell me how great it is, either verbally or, hopefully, with a check. Plus, by the time I finish a long piece, I am heartily sick of the thing and just want it gone. But writing, like wine, improves with age. The few times I have neglected my own advice, I have regretted it.

6 comments:

  1. Just curious, Ray, who your readers might be.

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  3. Kathleen and Sarah, My first reader is Anna, who lives next door. She has read every book ever written and knows good from bad. My next reader is Jeannie, the grammar fiend. Once I get past these two, there is one final test for the courageous. Her name is Marsha, and the woman is brutal. But she won't let me send out a bad manuscript. (She was also a good mother to our children and makes great fried chicken).

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  4. Ray -
    Thank you so much for sharing this. I have to ask, when you first stopped at a good point while writing--the very first time--how did it feel? What was that like for you? It sounds so wise, but I am obviously nervous to do so. Thus, the question. :-)

    And good work on knowing the need to let go of the words. I've heard from editors throughout my career, "You can't be married to your words." They are so true. It often causes the general public to miss out on some great writing.

    Love the picture on the beach, too. Nothing says writing and inspiration to me like a beach. Thanks for sharing!
    JessicaQ
    PS-I just knew one of your readers was your wife. No editor can touch what a spouse can do to a written work. :-)

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  5. Ray, what awesome advice! Number one was probably my favorite because it has never crossed my mind. I get overly excited once I begin the story, and I feel that if I don't get everything down on paper, I'll forget it all. However, now I realize that if I leave the story for the day with still more in mind, those ideas have more time to simmer, evolve, and mature by the next day, perhaps into something even better than planned.

    Number two is also great. Just let the writing age...like wine...and cheese :)

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  6. Ray,

    I really love what you say about letting the work mature. One of my greatest faults is to rush my work and want to present it immediately. I agree this is a temptation that must be avoided.

    toni

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